Blog#9: Finishing off with the Romantics Video
Hello everyone, this short video summarizes and goes over my modern and romantic era essay. The comparison between the modern and romantic periods is described in a more efficient and simple way. I wasn't able to cover the ideas that I wanted, however it still gives the reader an overall idea on what my essay talks about. Hope you enjoy :)
Wow! Excellent approach to nature. You chose a unique topic that raises environmental awareness and discusses a major global issue. The evidence you chose to support your idea is unique, but more importantly, it directly relates to your main idea. I just hope your writing does the same.
ReplyDeleteGood Job, Anas! I liked how you used the topic of how nature is disregarded. How people focus more on technology than nature? this is a good topic as it was and is still a major global issue. With your ideas, I think a lot of people are going to start appreciating nature. if your writing states all your ideas briefly and concisely then your paper should be good. more people will start appreciating nature because this paper will raise awareness of how a lot of people use technology excessively and disregard nature.
ReplyDeleteI like how you made the connection between nature's importance and perspective in the romantic and modern eras. I don't believe things will improve as long as people are distracted by new technologies and do not value the natural world around them. I also think you did a wonderful job selecting your evidence to back up your claims, as they were all interesting.
ReplyDeleteHello Anasss! Great Job on your blog. My blog was quite similar to yours since I also touched upon how individuals are more focused on a certain aspects of beauty, in other words, someone's outside appearance than their inside. You, on the other hand, decided to go with a different approach by signifying nature rather than individuals and how other modern day advancements are stirring them away from nature. Using DiCaprio's campaign was a great approach as you helped challenge others and make them wonder how a campaign would be seen as a great connection.
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